This is my first draft for my contents page. When talking to others for their opinions they feel like it is very basic and simple and does not fit with my genre at all. They seem to not appeal to it. However they do like how it links very closely to my front cover. This is done by using the same cover lines from my front cover and including them onto my contents page. They also like the fact that "Lelia Ray" is still the main focal point throughout my magazine so far. By having another picture of her it just emphasises on how the whole issue is based around this artist and how the magazine is willing to capture different sides to her. By capturing different photos it also keeps the readers entertained and to wait for whats there gonna read next. However some of the people I asked like the simplicity as they felt that it was easy to read and good for them to quickly scan the page so that they go to what fascinates them the most.
When producing my contents page I used the software "pages" which I found difficult to use when editing and moving about texts. This is a possible reason why it is so plain and simple as I was hard to incorporate different techniques to make the contents page more interesting and different.
On my next draft I think that I will change the background to a plain 'purply' colour and include more features that will stand out, but also keep the easiness for the reader to chose the pages they want to read first and add in more pictures not just of Lelia Ray but maybe even other famous artists that I have wrote about.
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